tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post2867021080059520848..comments2023-04-15T05:07:46.415-04:00Comments on Kiss of a Vampire-100 Baby Challenge: Chapter 72-Out in the Openjazenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-33502132859105906192015-05-19T13:59:38.131-04:002015-05-19T13:59:38.131-04:00:( aww this will be hard on her mom knowing the ma...:( aww this will be hard on her mom knowing the man she married is a vile piece of trash. :(<br /><br />thanks for readingjazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-62668237622180513392015-05-17T14:19:13.965-04:002015-05-17T14:19:13.965-04:00I'm worried about her Mum after this :/I'm worried about her Mum after this :/ Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-18749463737281448592012-02-14T21:27:49.079-05:002012-02-14T21:27:49.079-05:00You're right having both their parents missing...You're right having both their parents missing just made an already stressful situation 10 times worse. Mulo had her the whole time and we'll find out in later chapters why he kept her. <br /><br />The pregnancy will be rough but she will make it through. They make their arrival next chapter. Keeping her distance from her parents helped to alleviate some of the stress of that situation but being thrown back into close quarters with her dad, on top of the Marcus stuff and her own disappearance it was too much for her to handle. <br /><br />It was time for Kathy to know what kind of man she married. She hasn't fully processed it all yet.<br /><br />Thanks for reading!jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-74979865518264526832012-02-14T20:18:02.869-05:002012-02-14T20:18:02.869-05:00No wonder the boys are upset and not behaving like...No wonder the boys are upset and not behaving like themselves. Their Dad is missing and then their Mom too. I wonder where Amari was for those three days. Marisol may have had something to do with it.<br /><br />I hope that Amari makes it through the pregnancy okay. Not only is she worried about Marcus, but now the stress from her father. Her mother needed to know what Amari's father had done to their family. I hate how hurt and angry she must feel now!<br /><br />Great update, Jaz!Daisies Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09529096430399435508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-5598509271605784862012-02-11T17:00:16.140-05:002012-02-11T17:00:16.140-05:00Wow. Thank you for spending your day reading all ...Wow. Thank you for spending your day reading all of my story. It has been an emotional roller coaster for Amari. A lot has gone on in her poor life and there is still a lot more to accomplish.<br /><br />As for her other kids, I let story progression deal with them mostly unless I need them for the something. So far they have not had kids on their own. Nina (Aric's wife) keeps getting fired from her jobs because she's always late LOL. As far as I know Aric, Bynni, and Ceula are all presently unemployed in the the game.<br /><br />Feel free to share ideas if you want. I always welcome them. It may or may not be a spoiler LOL.<br /><br />I'm glad you enjoyed it. The story has become more involved than I thought it would be when I started writing it. I hope the rest of the story keeps you just as entertained.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-90700256372213109152012-02-11T14:44:07.503-05:002012-02-11T14:44:07.503-05:00Wow, Jazen! I finally got a chance to read all of ...Wow, Jazen! I finally got a chance to read all of your story. Thought it made sense to read it yesterday and this morning with the Breaking Dawn premiere. I'm having an all vamp weekend! This is amazing! I feel like I'm on an emotional roller coaster. First I love Mulo, then hate him, then not too sure what to think--part of me still wants to love him and thinks he's misunderstood. Totally love Marcus, but now wondering about what's happened to him. I would love to see more of Binny and Aric's stories--are they having kids, their careers, etc. I noticed 3 cribs in the nursery...hmmmm.<br /><br />I have some ideas how dear Amari could get out of her situation, but I wouldn't want to be a spoiler! Your writing is very entertaining--enjoyed every minute of it. Hubby came home from doing errands and found me reading at the computer and wanted to know what was wrong. Said it looked like I had been crying. I had been--such and emotional experience! (I had just read about Marcus' cancer and Amari realizing just how much she loved him.) :'-(Dreamsong Simshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585281212028966323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-62672866328744203012012-02-09T15:52:57.404-05:002012-02-09T15:52:57.404-05:00Definitely am!
Just wanted to comment that in cas...Definitely am!<br /><br />Just wanted to comment that in case you didn't know, the link to Hadley's blog, which is Bonnie's now has changed, I didn't realize it would smurf everyone's links up...LOL Here's the new link:<br /><br />http://reedfamily100babychallenge.blogspot.com/Cassiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03467775886310644947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-88817778076439144312012-02-09T15:23:49.520-05:002012-02-09T15:23:49.520-05:00She is very worried and losing those days added ex...She is very worried and losing those days added extra stress and fear on her sons. She has a lot to contend with, but somehow she manages.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-25060402355531425482012-02-09T12:43:34.568-05:002012-02-09T12:43:34.568-05:00She must be so worried about her husband then losi...She must be so worried about her husband then losing the last few days like that must be awful and now her parents, wow. If she survives the last few weeks of the pregnancy then she will have coped well :)Lckygrl1975https://www.blogger.com/profile/00651487110014309878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-87676321939152948952012-02-08T20:07:33.942-05:002012-02-08T20:07:33.942-05:00He wasn't the only one to say something, he wa...He wasn't the only one to say something, he was simply the one that was not so gentle in his delivery. :) You has the reader know who had her, but they don't. LOL and she doesn't remember right now.<br /><br />It was time for Kathy to learn the truth. Keeping the secret from her mom was damaging their relationship. Kathy hasn't truly dealt with everything yet.<br /><br />She does feel bad for resorting to hitting him like that. It is only natural that he is upset and was worried when she also went missing. She understands he was scared and angry which makes her feel worse about hitting him.<br /><br />I don't think you are alone in those feelings towards George. He brought this all upon himself.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-27608861992692421082012-02-08T18:42:26.794-05:002012-02-08T18:42:26.794-05:00~ I find it hard to believe that Dax was the only ...~ I find it hard to believe that Dax was the only one to say something about the missing days,we all know who had her & what he was doing to her,or should I say the babies!<br />~ So glad the truth is out in the open,Amari has enough secrets to keep,& having her mother,even though a painful thing for Kathy to confront,will help her through what her father created!<br />~ Amari feels bad about hitting Dax,but I am sure they will be fine,it is only natural,as his dad is missing possible dead,& then their mom goes missing,his outrage was worry over this,he was so scared his mother would not come home like their dad!<br />~ I do not feel the least did sorry for Georges heart ache at the moment,as he created it himself,& has no one else to blame!<br />~ Loved it! MORE,when you can!(",)Aussie Karimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794550141380508542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-37042413413465280582012-02-08T12:13:48.706-05:002012-02-08T12:13:48.706-05:00Dax was a bit of a smart ass to his mother. He is...Dax was a bit of a smart ass to his mother. He is angry and not thinking clearly but she hates that she resorted to hitting him. <br /><br />George showing remorse? Maybe now that he has lost something it will help him see the error of his selfish ways. I do need to answer the where's Marcus question. I will I promise. For challenge purposes I did need to right him out somehow. He grew on a lot of people which is why I couldn't kill him. However the missing thing has presented it's own little problem. Once I work it all out, the question of where he is will be answered.<br /><br />Glad you are still enjoying the story. :)jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-61711208192913134222012-02-08T11:20:55.915-05:002012-02-08T11:20:55.915-05:00Ooh, I was just wondering when you were going to c...Ooh, I was just wondering when you were going to come out with a new post and here it is! Yay! This was awesome! Poor Amari...I know she feels bad about slapping Dax, but quite frankly he had it coming! I'm glad her mother knows about everything now...maybe her father will show some remorse now that he's dealing with the consequences of his actions...I'm also anxious to see what happened to Marcus. Is he dead? *gulp* I know you talked about finding an acceptable way to get him out of the picture before, but he's grown on me since then. I'm anxious to see what has happened to him and if he's alive and if he and Amari have to be apart now. Ahhh! Your story is beyond amazing!Cassiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03467775886310644947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-33801704653264876862012-02-08T09:46:16.815-05:002012-02-08T09:46:16.815-05:00Yes that is one loose end that has been wrapped up...Yes that is one loose end that has been wrapped up. Mom knows the truth now. All that's left is for her to really deal with the knowledge that the man she married isn't who she believed him to be all these years.<br /><br />Dax was harsh but he's hurting. He lashed out. It wasn't the best way but he has a lot of anger and doesn't know where to direct it. Hopefully he will learn to cope. With my lack of babies it is easy to forget this is a baby challenge. She has 5 currently with new ones on the way. That will bring her up to 7 or 8 once they are born.<br /><br />The missing 3 days. Mulo had her all to himself so there is no telling what he did to her during that time. Whatever it was, it couldn't be good.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-15521719260442515332012-02-08T09:08:53.737-05:002012-02-08T09:08:53.737-05:00Thank God the sleazebag of a father has been broug...Thank God the sleazebag of a father has been brought to light. He's the reason for all of this starting. I'm glad her mother knows the truth now. It's a hard blow, but still, better to know...<br /><br />Dax en Dun... It's a shame they fight so much. You can understand that they miss their dad, but for Dax to react like that to Imari was a bit harsh... I hope it all pans out. You know, I had actually forgotten this was a baby-challenge! How many kids are we in already?? 4-5??<br /><br />WHAT THE FUCK DID MULO DO TO IMARI????????????? AND THE BABIES???????????<br />CAUSE I KNOW THIS SHIT IS GOING TO HAVE SOME LONG-TERM EFFECTS! DAMMIT!!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-52199155981351838122012-02-08T07:36:51.573-05:002012-02-08T07:36:51.573-05:00She has put him out, but she's not ready to de...She has put him out, but she's not ready to deal with everything right now. Denial will be her coping mechanism of choice. She will focus her energy on helping Amari and her grandchildren.<br /><br />Amari does need to pull herself together for the sake of her boys. Dax is acting out and he could get worse if she doesn't change. She is drowning in despair.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-85213592639572621622012-02-08T07:33:35.978-05:002012-02-08T07:33:35.978-05:00It will be hard once she's over the initial sh...It will be hard once she's over the initial shock. Learning that her husband could be so heartless was painful. She and Amari will have a talk once Kathy is ready. Right now she is focusing on helping Amari. <br /><br />What happened to Marcus? That is the question everyone wants answered. I can tell you he didn't walk away willingly. He wouldn't do that to his family.<br /><br />Amari and the babies. The babies are born next chapter but things don't get any easier for her. <br /><br />Mulo, you can never tell what he will do next. His behavior has become very erratic. Of course Marisol is enjoying this. She's all about grief and destruction.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-27733934555337485702012-02-08T07:29:26.657-05:002012-02-08T07:29:26.657-05:00Amari tried for her mom's sake to simply avoid...Amari tried for her mom's sake to simply avoid her father, but he kept pushing. With everything she is dealing with, she let it all come bubbling out.<br /><br />Her reaction made it hard to gauge how she really feels and what she believes right now. She could think he's a little bonkers but with the friction between he an Amari she knows at least some of what he told her has to be true.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-29092643195281493782012-02-08T05:44:09.994-05:002012-02-08T05:44:09.994-05:00That argument there at the end was intense. I fee...That argument there at the end was intense. I feel badly for Amari's Mom. All the secrets revealed in a rush. I wonder if she believes about the vampire stuff. Maybe she thinks George went a little bonkers. Good job kicking him out, hahaha. ^_^Zhippidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12570869365967598793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-84551838984795661242012-02-08T00:20:43.532-05:002012-02-08T00:20:43.532-05:00I'm glad Kathy knows, hard as it will be once ...I'm glad Kathy knows, hard as it will be once it all sets in..she has to be in shock at the moment...I wonder if Amari will need to explain the rest of it to her..that would be hard to do. Lots of suspense, what happened to Marcus and what will happen to Amari and her babies? What will Mulo do next? Is Marisol enjoying all this?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-78857959006154162092012-02-07T23:23:18.193-05:002012-02-07T23:23:18.193-05:00Too bad Kathy found out the way she did. Now that ...Too bad Kathy found out the way she did. Now that she's shown him the door, I wonder how she'll cope. Letting go of such a long marriage can't be easy. But she has Amari, I have a feeling they'll need each other over the next few days.<br /><br />As for Amari, poor thing, she's reaaly losing it now. She needs to get better for her boys' sake i think Dax acting out like that is a cry for help.Valprehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15992942004048836531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-90940846518103365582012-02-07T21:43:30.060-05:002012-02-07T21:43:30.060-05:00It was time to bring mom into the light. Amari do...It was time to bring mom into the light. Amari does need her now more than ever. They will need each other to get through this. Her father has always been a dick about this situation. He wasn't really losing anything so he didn't truly feel her pain until now.<br /><br />Awww. Poor Dax is not handling things well. His father is gone and then his mother takes off. He's angry and taking out on those around him. Aric will rein him in. Mulo is doing a number on this family being selfish. He had no thoughts as to what it would do to those boys to have their mom disappear while their dad is still missing. He was a bastard for that one. He had her for 3 days doing who knows what to her. <br /><br />Jonas is very sweet and he is on the cute side. He hadn't been involved that much before but he and Carter were needed more this chapter.<br /><br />It will be a while before she will be able to be at peace with her life. I know she has had it rough. I promise I am trying to think of happy.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-26434257727656140172012-02-07T21:25:23.705-05:002012-02-07T21:25:23.705-05:00Whoa Mom! I am so happy she knows the truth now! A...Whoa Mom! I am so happy she knows the truth now! Amari needs her to get through this and also Marcus' disappearance. Surely her father couldn't have believed that they could really get pass that! Um Dad, you're the reason why she is suffering! How dare he even suggest that they try to move on!<br /><br />Dax made me want to fight him with the way he was talking to his mother but I get it. He is hurting right now and the fact that she left too was probably too much to handle! Curse that damn Mulo and his tricks! Bastard!<br /><br />Jonas on the other hand is a sweet and pretty cute! Never noticed before!<br /><br />I want to hug Amari! I will be happy when she can finally breath and smile.Qui.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00025642400085205427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-71217788186740154252012-02-07T20:03:41.074-05:002012-02-07T20:03:41.074-05:00Amari would be lost without those two. They have ...Amari would be lost without those two. They have turned out to be great friends for her. It is unsettling that she has lost 3 days. She has no idea that she was with Mulo or what he did to her over the course of those days. :(<br /><br />George did finally have his lies come crashing down around him. Kathy handled it like a lady. It is sad for her to learn that the man she was married to was like that. <br /><br />Thanks, glad you enjoyed the chapter.jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8678905297417588624.post-25419744728385965052012-02-07T19:43:23.209-05:002012-02-07T19:43:23.209-05:00Thank goodness for Carter and Jonas...they take su...Thank goodness for Carter and Jonas...they take such good care of Amari. I don't like how those hours became days though... that's a bit unsettling, poor Amari. Stupid George, glad Kathy told him to pack up and go... sad she had to find out though. She's totally handling it like a champ though. Great chapter!Dreamerzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07335715042614874287noreply@blogger.com